caught by the call
of the flowers and mountain, i forget
how steep the path is
Hando
“write one in the same tone/sense and spirit..”
seduced by the white floor tiles
I forget the illusion
in mopping
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Nicole Hague-Andrews
This is an awesome response on Hando’s haiku … well done.
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Indeed the daily toils can make us forget.
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yes and I wish I’d never bought those white tiles!
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I absolutely love this. There’s a little something in it.
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