Carpe diem revise a Haiku#4 SHIKI

a basket of grass,

and no one there,-

mountains of spring

Shiki

My revision..

woven reed mat

edges unfinished

summer river

6 thoughts on “Carpe diem revise a Haiku#4 SHIKI”

Chèvrefeuille January 4, 20141:26 pm

What a joy to lay your head on a fresh woven reed mat … nice revision Nicole.

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1. nicolethelocalartist January 4, 20141:43 pm
  
  Have a nice nap…we’re going swimming!!
  
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  1. Chèvrefeuille January 4, 201410:35 pm
    
    Have fun 🙂
    
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angieinspired January 4, 20145:57 pm

Good one

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moondustwriter January 6, 201410:53 pm

Love your revision
I also really like the layout of your site. It fits well with your work

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1. nicolethelocalartist January 7, 20148:37 am
  
  Thanks ..
  
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